How to go into detail about characters' appearences without straying off topic?

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10-08-2010, 04:18 PM

d-ray657

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Include as much detail as you want in your first draft.

Edit it.

Don't fall in love with any particular turn of phrase if it doesn't fit within the context of writing.

Edit it again.

Let it sit for a day or two, then edit it again. Be merciless on yourself.

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D-Ray

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